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Danchou's order ( Critic requested ) by PrinceKurapika Danchou's order ( Critic requested ) by PrinceKurapika
Art done traditionally, cropped and rotated using CS4 .
text done using paint.

Tools: unipen 0.1-0.3 , short coupon bond , mechanical pencil

Possible mistakes : the perspective , anatomy and shading
Why? I am still a beginner.. XD

This is my 6th deviation (if you dun count my oldest deviations which are all sucky) at the same time my 6th attempt in inking.. though I've been a deviant for 6 months but I seldom submit arts... ^^" Kinda busy. but i was shocked of my improvements.. ahh kinda.. maybe it has something to do with me being a lefty? ne?


here's my gallery of traditional arts..
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Edit: this scene is based on my fanfic, I haven't write it yet.. I won't spoil anything about the condition.. :icontrollfaceplz:

and to my friends: this is the doodle that I am talking about :D I forgot to add the "motion" LOL

-kira
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123-Eat Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
Nero-san :) this is Yzcera~ and nice drawing tho! I envy youuu
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RhiannonWolf Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Will you please write your fanfic soon!? I'm almost dying in anticipation over here! *desperate*
I like the picture though. :D
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wahahahaha hai hai... XD I should blame myself for it.. though cuz I am always sleepy....
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RhiannonWolf Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Well, would it help if you got more sleep?
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
uhhhh.... ^^" when I woke up..after a few mins.. I feel sleepy again =(
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RhiannonWolf Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Well, if you feel sleepy, then why don't you go back to sleep? Maybe you didn't get enough. :shrug:
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that's my prob.. I'm a sleepy head XD like kyoya hibari.. (if ya know him thou)
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RhiannonWolf Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Um...no, I don't know him. ^^;
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
kyoya of hitman reborn... =_=
hehe... -yawn-
well... will you critic my fic.. if I'll publish it? you're a writer so you know a lot of things... about.. this.. stuff.. -blinks at my blank paper-
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sunmoonblue Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The shading is actually pretty good ,better than what I'm capable of.XD
The anatomy looks okay to me with the exception of the left hands. It looks like the fingers are webbed.But if that is your intention ,then it is okay, I guess.
Perspective....well I suck at it and never really bother to practice on that.So ,I can't really help you on this.But the perspective for this piece is a bit confusing .I'm not exactly sure where the lines converge.(as in the point where all the lines meet) You really need to figure this out yourself since I don't exactly know what I'm talking about either...XD
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