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Danchou's order ( Critic requested ) by PrinceKurapika Danchou's order ( Critic requested ) by PrinceKurapika
Art done traditionally, cropped and rotated using CS4 .
text done using paint.

Tools: unipen 0.1-0.3 , short coupon bond , mechanical pencil

Possible mistakes : the perspective , anatomy and shading
Why? I am still a beginner.. XD

This is my 6th deviation (if you dun count my oldest deviations which are all sucky) at the same time my 6th attempt in inking.. though I've been a deviant for 6 months but I seldom submit arts... ^^" Kinda busy. but i was shocked of my improvements.. ahh kinda.. maybe it has something to do with me being a lefty? ne?


here's my gallery of traditional arts..
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Edit: this scene is based on my fanfic, I haven't write it yet.. I won't spoil anything about the condition.. :icontrollfaceplz:

and to my friends: this is the doodle that I am talking about :D I forgot to add the "motion" LOL

-kira
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123-Eat Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nero-san :) this is Yzcera~ and nice drawing tho! I envy youuu
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123-Eat Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Why in the world am I like "Nero-san :) this is Yzcera~ and nice drawing tho! I envy youuuuu" >.> So out of character. Rn, I'm the idealistic grumpy girl standing in cobtrast to that cheerful energy ball that typed that before. >.> Why would I envy you though? :>
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ohh u made a DA LOL 
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RhiannonWolf Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Will you please write your fanfic soon!? I'm almost dying in anticipation over here! *desperate*
I like the picture though. :D
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wahahahaha hai hai... XD I should blame myself for it.. though cuz I am always sleepy....
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RhiannonWolf Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Well, would it help if you got more sleep?
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
uhhhh.... ^^" when I woke up..after a few mins.. I feel sleepy again =(
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RhiannonWolf Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Well, if you feel sleepy, then why don't you go back to sleep? Maybe you didn't get enough. :shrug:
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that's my prob.. I'm a sleepy head XD like kyoya hibari.. (if ya know him thou)
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RhiannonWolf Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Um...no, I don't know him. ^^;
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
kyoya of hitman reborn... =_=
hehe... -yawn-
well... will you critic my fic.. if I'll publish it? you're a writer so you know a lot of things... about.. this.. stuff.. -blinks at my blank paper-
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sunmoonblue Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The shading is actually pretty good ,better than what I'm capable of.XD
The anatomy looks okay to me with the exception of the left hands. It looks like the fingers are webbed.But if that is your intention ,then it is okay, I guess.
Perspective....well I suck at it and never really bother to practice on that.So ,I can't really help you on this.But the perspective for this piece is a bit confusing .I'm not exactly sure where the lines converge.(as in the point where all the lines meet) You really need to figure this out yourself since I don't exactly know what I'm talking about either...XD
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I dunno what I'm doing with the perspective though -scratches my head- I just look at the tiles... that leo,kil ang gon are standing of..in the yorkshin arc... I look at the pattern and made it into walls... >_<

and about the hands.. it's intentional ^^" it looks bad? wahhhhh....
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sunmoonblue Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
well,for a starter ,you can try to figure out where all the lines are converging,that will probably give you an idea.

Not really,the angle of the hand looks a bit off.
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes I have to improve.. on the backgrounds since I am a traditional artist.. X_X and as I have noticed , digi artist here only used background colors.. and etc.. to their arts.. they rarely draw buildings.. .. and other stuffs though
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sunmoonblue Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It really depend on the artist. Some of them are really good at drawing builiding and stuff.Those that aren't that good would not draw it for the sake of making their drawing look "better". I do that all the time.lol
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
but well.. only few can make it here right? I mean the hxh fans.. almost all of us are newbies.. and if there are professionals.. some can't even get the face accurately.cuz of their "own style"..
well at least you are good in photoshop =)
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sunmoonblue Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
True.Well,some of the professional are able to.The japanese fans are really good at drawing.They can capture the character essence in their drawing even if their style is different.I seen a lot of them and it blow me away.
Thanks! Though I have a long way to go...:)
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so far majority of the japanese really get the face accurately..right? XD only in pixiv.. haven't saw anyone here who got the face accurately..cuz I always saw.."the artist's style" especially on the way they draw the eyes.. ^^" but it's always good to used our art style..in that way we are more comfortable.. and things get easier

I'll try that someday when I have time.. ^_^ what programs do you used? and you're welcome =)
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Amanda404 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So, there would be a scene like this...? I-I see... ^^

This deviation is good, did you use photoshop to edit it a little? The texture is kinda different. :P But , overall, Kira is in-character, which was a good thing. Kira looks determine, but, his eyes doesn't shows that he want to kill or something like that. But this is a very nice work of you. Good job and keep it up! :D
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is the doodle I am talking about.. I erase the lines at the bottom digitally... I dun plan to use white ink at that moment since my hand was injured.. =(

and about the texture... it's a trick i won't tell... :P :P
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Amanda404 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Owh! *pout* Teach me! DX *pout* Why you won't tell? :3
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're a friend.. I'll teach you ne.. when I have time ok? XD
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Amanda404 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! XD Thanks. Okay, I'll wait for you. :3
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh well.. XD maybe we can use da muro? XD
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Amanda404 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Umm.. Okay... :3
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can use tablet now
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Nakawife Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very nice. :)
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you kana-chan >w<
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Nakawife Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome, dearie. :iconaawplz:
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yo kana.. wanna critic it?
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Nakawife Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welp. I don't really know how. :)
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ohhhh... ^^"

I want Copic like you
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Nakawife Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AW! I know right?! I STILL can't afford copics.... ;A;
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
how many copics all in all? how much?
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Hisae93 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
good job, really like it! :)
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you, -bows- anyways.. do you have any critic about this? DX (I bet it's on the perspective)
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Hisae93 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fingers are too skinny i think xP but the rest of pic is ok :D great idea with it anyway :) but what's goin' on with this scar in the wall? Can u tell me sth about this drawing?
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I forgot to add some lines.. that is why it is more confusing... sorry about the wall... i suck in perspective.. I haven't read any tutorials yet... DX

ahhh... he scratched it.. O_O
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Hisae93 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah ok now I see xP np I am not good in perspective too don't worry xd
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
-scratches my head- hehehe thanks for pointing those stuffs.. I wish I could improve faster
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Hisae93 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wish I could too xDD
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well let's watch "art attack" XD
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caractrer-manga Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
I love !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Of is the beautiful work, how dress you !?
It is brilliant!!! That to say furthermore...
It is magnificent :heart:
Good work ;)
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
merci mon amie.. ^_^
I'll make one for you , someday... ^_^ take care!
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caractrer-manga Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
You're welcome ;p
Oh, it is really kind !!! Thank you very much :love:
You are not to oblige =)
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're one of my good friends here... so no prob/
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caractrer-manga Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Thank you very much :heart:
You are one of my good friend here also =)
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PrinceKurapika Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
merci mon amie
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caractrer-manga Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
You're welcome ;p
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