Danchou's order ( Critic requested )

Art done traditionally, cropped and rotated using CS4 .
text done using paint.

Tools: unipen 0.1-0.3 , short coupon bond , mechanical pencil

Possible mistakes : the perspective , anatomy and shading
Why? I am still a beginner.. XD

This is my 6th deviation (if you dun count my oldest deviations which are all sucky) at the same time my 6th attempt in inking.. though I've been a deviant for 6 months but I seldom submit arts... ^^" Kinda busy. but i was shocked of my improvements.. ahh kinda.. maybe it has something to do with me being a lefty? ne?


here's my gallery of traditional arts..
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Edit: this scene is based on my fanfic, I haven't write it yet.. I won't spoil anything about the condition..

and to my friends: this is the doodle that I am talking about I forgot to add the "motion" LOL

-kira